O.K. someone finaly had the guts to tell me I suck at drawing and gave me some tips on what to change and how.
so I went out and found some tutorials on anime bodies and heads so I would have guide lines instead of the free hand crap I was doing before, and I took the persones advice to heart and fixed it.
Since none of you ever told me I sucked at any of my stuff I'm willing to do an art request for anybody who can tell me if I did something wrong in this drawing and tell me how to fix it.
here's the rules
1 I have to find the criticizume helpful, No saying "your ___ sucks" tell me how to fix my___ and I would love to do a request
2 you can't give the same advice someone else did unless you expand on it
3 you can criticize anything and everything, this is about me getting better so be as critical as you can
4 you don't have to play along with this "game", you could just say it looks good as is, though that won't win you an art request
5 your art request can be one of my characters, one of your characters, practicly anything that is within my power to draw.